Friday, July 4, 2014

Strapon Instruction Halfway Point Retrospective

Not a whole lot to say about this one, honestly.  It's a pretty straightforward advice style special.  I ended up not implementing any sort of narrative into it.  Hopefully it doesn't come across at too dry, but I can see how it would.  I didn't put a huge amount of character into this special, which kind of sucks, but it is what it is.  The position pictures weren't exactly character driven narrative, either.  I did struggle slightly with the tone, here.  In my last blog post, I talked about my goals and narrative direction.  Basically, I said that I didn't really want to make these utopian.  It's difficult to balance that desire with the necessity of creating a good product.  Nobody wants to read dystopian porn.  This one is definitely turning out to be very much a "Kelly Hart" style story, rather than a "Taboo Mom Natasha" style story. 
I'm sure that a lot of people would say that I'm overthinking this, since I am just writing a little porno story, but honestly, I've seen so many shitty captions, and I think that the difference between good captions and shitty captions is the amount of hands on the keyboard writing them.  Shitty captions are typed one handed, while good captions are typed with two.  Good captions are written with the big head, shitty ones are written with the little head. 

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There's still 3 more to go, along with the Bondage Issue intro page, which I need to make sure that I actually do this time.  The 4th page will cover the actual insertion and fucking.  The 5th page will talk about involving other women or girls.  The 6th page will discuss less femdommish anal play, and serve as an outro.  After I finish this, I'll move onto the Acolyte pamphlet, which hopefully won't end up being too much writing.  I'm still not sure exactly how I want to present it. 

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