Wednesday, November 26, 2014

Bedroom Bukkake Retrospective

This set, I think, is actually the first 'character arc' type set that I've made for this project, unless you consider tossing Jenni in at every possible moment, to be a character arc.  I don't, really.  The Hooker Birthday/Nun Lifestyle sets, also, aren't really telling a story arc, they're just little episodic vignettes, which are used to illustrate different categories of boy, and different facets of Temple life.  I like the idea of having little stories in these.  Anyone who's played Deus Ex, probably remembers the stories of Decker, Erin, and Young.  Now, this isn't anywhere near that level of storytelling, but it is something somewhat similar.  A little character story, inside the larger story, that serves to flesh out and humanize the villains.  MeK has its qt3.14 arab girl monologues, and DoL has its magazine.

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The first page jumps right into the story, assuming that you know who these people are, and have read the previous instalment.  This is somewhat problematic, because in a game, there is no real guarantee that the player will have read it, since these are collectables, and the game is so non-linear.  Therefore, I'll have to give a small recap in the intro of whatever magazine I decide to toss this special into.
I actually had an entire idea about how the divorce would go down, and how the Daughters would send some thuggish monks to make sure that the Child Support payments kept coming, but in the end, that's not something that anyone really wants to read, and at worst, it could alienate part of the audience, if it hits them too close to home.  Plus, this is a narrative, so I need to keep the sex front and center.  I gave the husband exactly 2 sentences, which is enough.
The rest of the page is just sex.  A note on the picture, this entire 'set' is something of a work in progress for the artist, he posts on pixiv, and his stuff is actually pretty difficult to find.  A bigger issue, though, is that he posts a lot of /ss/ mdom stuff, which isn't particularly useful for me.  I was able to turn the sleepfucking pics into something usable, but most of his stuff has the mother frowning, or even crying.  Can't use it.  I'm not sure if I'll be coming out with a third installment, but if I do, I'll be butting up against that issue again.

The second page has the narrator and her son fucking in their bedroom.  It gives a bit of story, bringing the other Lilians into the mix, basically telling the reader that she has managed to recruit at least a few of the local mothers, and that they're all willing to help each other, by providing safe places for sex.
On the final page of all of the magazines, there's some 'contact info', which really just serves to present the Lilians as a vast, international, organization.  Beyond those official Temples, though, there would, realistically, be a great many 'unofficial' Temples, Lilian study groups, groups of converted single mothers, homeschooling nudist colonies fully contained on a single plot of land, maybe even welfare scam groups, like those mormon families, where legally, the patriarch isn't married to anyone, and all of his wives are single mothers, on welfare.  They combine all of their checks, and carve out a lifestyle.  The only difference, really, is that with the Lilians, there's no central patriarch.  The families are united by their religion, and exist under the 'High Priestess', who, most likely, is just the lady who started the organization.  Maybe she's the one with the most money, who knows?
These little Lilian communes would be an interesting idea for a small game.  Become alpha-bitch of a little Lilian commune.  Honestly, I think that for my next game, I'll do that, and make it a stepping stone to a bigger story, for a later game.  Like a proof of concept.  It's a hell of a lot easier to make a game if you've already got the bones of the gameplay worked out, and a 10 or 15 family commune is easier to simulate than a 50+ matriarch island.  If you have no idea what I'm on about, it's because I'm writing this to myself, mostly.  Basically, I'm planning on making LRLB into a series, because game development is fun.  The first game, obviously, is LRLB Gaiden/Taisen.  The 'stepping stone' game, that I'm thinking about here, would be called LRLB Joobachi, and would place the player in what amounts to a trailer park in rural Montana, where they use subterfuge and extreme bitchiness to become the 'Queen Bee' of the trailer park.  The next game, which would be built off of Joobachi, and be set 50-100 years after the Lilians kill off all of humanity.  You would play as a woman on an island, probably in the Pacific, which is being (politically) fought over, by the 3 groups that the Lilians split into after killing off all the men.  Let's just call that LRLB Kakumei for now.  There might be another one linking these, LRLB Shonetsu, where you play as a Eugenian woman, right after the mass genocide of humanity, and you essentially try to keep your little society running without anything even resembling logistics.  Of course, I might just grow up, and never make any of these.  Who knows?

Moving on, the third page is a change of pace. from the narrator and her son's first time, to the narrator's sex life with her son.  There's another reference to the ex-husband, but again, it's in and out with him, I try not to dwell too much on his story.  Basically, the setup here is that the mother is doing 'fundraising', to cover the costs associated with starting a Temple, which are quite high.  The exact nature of this fundraising is unstated, but it's described as being very tiring.
I didn't expand on exactly what the fundraising is, for 2 reasons.  The first reason is simple, I have limited space, and it's better to talk about sex, than to talk about fundraising.  The second reason is that from a storyline standpoint, keeping the nature of the fundraising vague allows the reader to fill it in for themselves.  If they want her to be turning tricks, if that turns them on, it's available.  If they want her to be a meth dealer, that's available too.  It just allows the reader to tailor the fantasy how they want.
There is a place for specific, and a place for vague, and I feel like right here, this is a good place for vague.  The real point of this page, though, isn't really to talk about the fundraising methods, it's to show the sacrifices made by the 'unofficial' High Priestesses, when they're trying to start up a Temple.

The final page more or less, just continues the story of the third page.  It adds another boy, and tells the reader that the narrator, again, has been successful in recruiting new (female) Lilians.  It also says, 'mothers, sisters, and girlfriends', implying that it's more than just the boy's mothers that she's bringing in.  It also reveals that sleep-fucking is actually one of her fetishes, or at least, her acceptance of it makes her popular with the boys, so she does it.  I guess it could really go either way, there.  It ends with a lead-in to a group sex/femdom fantasy, that doesn't really get expanded upon.  There isn't really an outro, or any conclusion, but since this is a narrative, I don't think it really needs one.

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So that's the Bedroom Bukkake special.  I'm actually sick right now, with what's probably either strep or bronchitis.  Sucks.  Anyway, next up is the Dating block of the Timid Boys pamphlet, and then I'll start releasing those Hooker Birthday/Nun Lifestyle sets. 
I'm actually done rewriting all but one of the Hooker Birthday sets, and I think I've got 2 more Nun Lifestyle sets to do.  Beyond that, I've got about 20 or so video ads that I'll be releasing, 4 at a time, which are basically just filler for the magazine, without a whole lot of other content.  They're just ads for Lilian produced porno movies, maybe with a few other little bits, as well.  Magazines need ads, right?
Now that I think about it, they'll probably even have those stupid little black bars slapped all over them.  I still wonder why they did that in the old porno mags, by the way.  Even the nasty, hardcore, magazines had those bars on the 'good parts', and in the end, you could still see through them, because the shit was just printed on like that.  Old porno mags were weird.

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