Wednesday, May 13, 2015

Grimoire Prewriting

First things first, Grimoire is a working title, that I may, or may not actually use.  I'm actually more likely to name this, "Contacting our Cosmic Comrades", than to actually use the term, "Grimoire". 
Anyway, here's my prewriting for the Lilian Grimoire, or at least, the part that I've found pics for.  The good stuff is at the end. 

The Grimoire is essentially a tool for High Priestesses to call down Lilith's demonic buddies, which need a name.
-cosmic comrades
-vanguard
-lilian guards
-violet guards
-generals
-succubi

I guess I'll use one of those, if I can't come up with something better between now and when I start writing this.  For the pics, I'll be using "(同人CG集) [ハルオミヤ] サキュバスパーティ" (Succubus Party) .  The overall structure of the pamphlet is to go through the different succubi, and explain what they like, what they don't like, and what they can do for the High Priestess who summons them.  Coming up with names for these succubi is going to be difficult. 
Since I've only got one boy, I'll frame the whole thing as being a guide for light skinned, dark haired, boys.  So these succubi go after that type of boy, and to summon them, you have to get one of those boys, bring him back to the crib, slap the "third eye majick crystal amplifier" on your heads (maybe), and fuck the shit out of him, while screaming the succubus' name.  Then she'll come and possess you, and fuck the kid.  I'll have to give it some thought.

I say, "give it some thought", as if that's not the entire point of prewriting.  Anyways, let's stick with what I've got so far.  This is kind of a tie in with the High Priestess Temple Intro block, so we'll start there.

In the HP block, the HP looks at a bunch of porn with the boy, this is to figure out which succubus would be the best fit for him.  When she gets the boy, she's already looked at which ones like boys like him, so the porn is to figure out which one he'd like best, because remember, she's going to be *possessing* the HP, here.  If the boy hates hardcore femdom, and the HP summons the "hardcore femdom" succubus, there's going to be problems.  So once she figures out what the boy's into, she'll show the boy some porn of a woman who resembles the succubus to be summoned, jerk him off, and instruct him to say her name upon his orgasm. 
At this point, the succubus enters the HP's body, and takes over.  I imagine that the HP could banish her, if things get too hairy, but that would probably piss off the succubus, and an HP wouldn't want that, right?  So then the succubus and the boy fuck like bunnies, and once the succubus gets what she wants, she owes the HP  a favor.  Maybe she fucks off after that, maybe not, but I imagine that the HP would get some time for just her and the boy, without being possessed. 
The real goal of the succubus in all this, aside from having a good time, is to get the cum of the boy, since it would somehow give her power, or something.  Maybe I'll just be vague about that particular aspect, and *why*, exactly, the succubi want it on their asscheeks, or their tits, or their pubic hair, or whatever.  Maybe it's a way to change the shape of something, like, the place where a boy cums will become 'better', in some way, as a sort of 'extra favor', in addition to the one that the HP requests.  This is why the HPs are so picky about where the cum lands, and this is why the HPs are all smoking hot.  They're literally staying in shape by fucking these boys. 
The only question then, is why an HP might not want the cum on her.  Ah, I got it.  So the succubi each have a specific place that they like the cum to land on, and they each afford specific physical 'buffs' when the cum lands in the right place.  So if one of the succubi wants it on her tits, the HP will get better tits after that, either perkier, or milkier, or bigger, or something.  If it's on the ass, her ass will get more firm, or bigger, or smaller, or whatever.  If it's inside, her pussy will get tighter, or her pussy muscles will get more controllable, or she'll get wetter, or whatever.  If it's not on her, though, there will be some kind of alternative.  Maybe she'll get smarter, or something.  Maybe she'll just get another favor. 

So, with that out of the way, let's get onto the real prewriting.  I'll start with the structure, then move onto the basics of each page.

10 - explanation of the grimoire's purpose, explanation of the summoning procedures, in detail
19 - continued explanation, basically, just an extension of 10
21 - description of blonde succubus, what she likes, how to summon her, and what sorts of things she can do for the HP.  Also, where she likes the cum to go.  Whether she only likes virgins, or not.  Possibly in a "list" style, possibly not.  I might go with the 'monster girl encyclopedia' approach for these pages
23 - description of blue haired succubus, what she likes, how to summon her, and what sorts of things she can do for the HP.  Also, where she likes the cum to go.  Whether she only likes virgins, or not.  Possibly in a "list" style, possibly not.  I might go with the 'monster girl encyclopedia' approach for these pages
25 - description of dark haired succubus, what she likes, how to summon her, and what sorts of things she can do for the HP.  Also, where she likes the cum to go.  Whether she only likes virgins, or not.  Possibly in a "list" style, possibly not.  I might go with the 'monster girl encyclopedia' approach for these pages
27 - description of indigo succubus, what she likes, how to summon her, and what sorts of things she can do for the HP.  Also, where she likes the cum to go.  Whether she only likes virgins, or not.  Possibly in a "list" style, possibly not.  I might go with the 'monster girl encyclopedia' approach for these pages
29 - narrative, describing a common night with the indigo succubus
31 - narrative, describing a common night with the blue-haired succubus
33 - narrative, describing a common night with the dark-haired succubus
34 - narrative, describing a common night with the blonde succubus

Yeah, that wasn't prewriting at all, that was just me picking pictures.  So let's go through each succubus, give them a name, and start working on their personality. 

Blonde Succubus - Ydun (Ee-dune) - Fun loving, and very bubbly.  Kind of like Katie K.  She's relatively young, among succubi, and loves trying new things  She has a reputation for spoiling her lovers, a bit.  She's relatively vanilla, and she doesn't really care how a boy fucks her, although she does prefer the 'from behind' positions.  She doesn't have a lot of power on her own, but she *does* have a bit of pull with the other succcubi.  She's quite gregarious, and she's always hosting parties in Lilith's domain, so if you can show her a good time, she'll make sure to spread the word, with the rest of the girls.  She'll take her cum anywhere, but she especially likes it on her ass, and up her back.  This gives HPs a better ass, and a slimmer waist, as well as getting rid of cellulite.  Cum anywhere else will have an effect, but it won't be particularly noticeable.  She doesn't really care whether a boy is a virgin, or not.  Ydun is normally one of the first succubi that a HP will summon, since she's so easy going, and so connected to the other succubi.

Blue Haired Succubus - Irkalla (Ear-Call-a) - Wise, very old, and one of Lilith's most trusted generals.  She is the 'femdom' succubus.  She's very stern with her boys, but she's also quite loving towards them, as well.  She's harsh, because she wants them to be successful.  Nothing pleases her more, than to see a boy who is interested in the deeper meanings of the Gospel, submissive, and eager to please.  She just goes gaga for boys like that, and forgets all about being stern.  She'll be dominant, but it's a type of loving dominance, like, holding a boy down, or tying him up, and kissing him all over, giving him *too much* pleasure, and ignoring her own orgasm.  She doesn't like the consistency of cum, though, so she'll generally demand that the boy cum all over himself, as she finds it funny to watch.  Depending on her mood, she might make him eat it, too.  She likes anal play, and strapon play, and she likes Ydun, as well, so there's the possibility of dual HP fucking, with Irkalla and Ydun making a sandwich out of the boy in question.  She's only interested in religious boys, but anal virginity is the only type that she really cares about.  Pleasing her will all but ensure improved relations with Temple elders.

Dark Haired Succubus - Nuit (New-Wit) - Maternal and loving, although slightly vanilla, when it comes to sex.  Nuit will often spoil the boys that she's with, with one, odd, exception.  She won't let them tongue her breasts during sex, only while cuddling, or during a sort of 'nursing handjob' scene.  She loves to cuddle, even more than she loves sex, and will often 'rush' the sex, a bit, just to get to the post coital cuddle.  When possessing her HP's, she will induce lactation, and her milk is often said to provide a calming, narcotic, but also entactogenic, effect, to the boys, making them less inclined towards sex, and more inclined towards snuggling.  She has the power of maternal seduction, and pleasing her, will generally result in the HP being irresistible to young boys and babies, which, in turn, engenders trust, from other mothers.  She likes creampies the best, although, oddly, a boy coming there, actually induces lactation.  The milk isn't narcotic, though :(  It's virgins only for her, with very few exceptions.

Indigo Succubus - Eos (Ay-Yo-s) - Unreasonably kinky, and often gets quite wild, in bed.  She's a screamer, too.  Her trademark is her high energy, during sex, often leaving both participants wiped out, and a bit sore, the next morning.  She likes to get fucked up, too, and she likes her boys to get fucked up with her.  She usually won't wait long after being summoned, to start the fucking.  She likes tearing clothes off of boys, and regularly goes overboard with the nipple biting.  She'll commonly 'mark' her lovers, leaving hickeys, teeth marks, and scratches.  Slapping and spanking turns her on, and she'll often demand that a boy spank her ass, while he fucks her from behind.  She's one of those people who will slap a dude's cock, and then go to town on it, and when he starts moaning, she'll jerk him off onto her face or tits, while she squeezes his balls.  Basically, she's nuts.  Really nuts.  Like, "bipolar in a manic phase" nuts.  She likes it on her face and tits, and a HP who manages this, will see her face and tits become more youthful in appearance.  No more crows feet, no more sagging, wrinkles going away, that sort of thing.  If pleased, she'll grant the HP power and dominance over men.  Not boys, men.   She's difficult to please, because while she's willing to accept a non-virgin, she greatly prefers virgins.  Of course, most virgins aren't emotionally equipped to handle the intensity of her sessions, and she won't show up, if she thinks that boy can't handle her.

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