Saturday, June 27, 2015

Mommy Bubble 80's Voyeur block Retrospective

I actually wrote these on Wednesday, but then I got bit by a dog, and I've been spending the time since then, either sleeping, or running around to hospitals, waiting in lines, and getting shots, and getting the wounds cleaned.  It's been shitty. 

Anyway, here's the retrospective.  I'll probably be keeping it short this time.

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The first page picture is kind of crappy, to be honest.  Not low quality, but still kind of crappy.  It doubles up on the son beating off, and we only get shades of the mom.  It's not the greatest picture in the world, and I wish that I'd been able to get more naked mom in there. 
The narrative text, again, is a bit of lead-in to the next page.  I fucked up with my "toos" a little bit, which sucks.  There's a bit of a fantasy here, which is nice, but most of this is just advancing the story. 
The guide text is where most of the meat of this page actually is.  I finally get around to explaining the deeper mysteries of undie exchange, which is good.  I wish that I had put a "truly" between never and understand, at the end, just to round out that line. 
I think that the concept in the guide text on this page is a bit interesting, because it gets into a bit of the religious reasoning behind the Lilian incest.  It doesn't go too far into it, but it at least acknowledges that there is a religious justification for all of this.  I might be expanding this idea in the future.

The second page picture is one that I really like.  I wish that pinknoise had spent a bit more time on the "mutual masturbation", but unfortunately, that really wasn't a part of his story.  At any rate, I really like this picture.  The mom's face and demeanor is really sexy, and it's just a really nice fantasy, overall. 
I got buck on the narrative this time.  There's actually 3 fantasies.  There's the makeout/petting scene, the regular voyeurism scene, and then the shadow scene.  The shadow scene was actually a late addition, when I realized that I had a bunch of blank space that I needed to fill with narrative.  I went a little overboard, but I like the way that it turned out.  Hopefully it didn't turn out too "gay" for your liking. 
The guide text takes a bit of a backseat on this page, more or less just expanding on the narrative.  There's a bit of a fantasy here, but it's more or less just the exact fantasy that is described in the narrative, and shown, in the picture.  I think that the colors helped a bit to accentuate those two sex acts.  There isn't a whole lot to say about the guide text.

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So I'm not sure if I actually kept it short, but I tried to.  At any rate, next up is probably going to be at least one mutual masturbation pic, and either a porn pic, or a toys pic, or both.  We'll see how it goes.  

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