Monday, August 3, 2015

Mommy Bubble 80's Porno block Retrospective and future plots

I'll be the first to admit, this is not among my greatest works.  There isn't a whole lot of storyline here, it's largely just a vignette.  The best thing that I can say about it, is that it bridges the gap between the cherrypop scene, and the rest of the pamphlet.  I could have used a Heather page for that purpose, but I've already made 2 of those, and they're in relatively close proximity to one another, so a third wouldn't be such a good idea.  As a bridge, I think, this is an okay little block. 

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The first page picture is actually quite tame, all things considered.  There's no sex, and no nudity.  It's very much an introductory picture, for the rest of the block.
The narrative here is, again, introductory.  I set up the scene, and start to explain the exact video that they're watching.  I kind of run out of space, though, so the guide picks up.
The guide content essentially serves to explain, in detail, what the video is, the storyline, where exactly it comes from, things like that.  I feel like I do a decent job here.  I was originally going to have the art film be another French job, but I decided to use Romanian, since I'm lazy.  Interesting little story bit, though, about the "Lilian Film Festival", though.  1978 would have been only 3 years after the initial revelation, it's interesting that they would have the infrastructure necessary to host an international film festival that early. 

The second page picture is where the fun starts.  I was originally going to crop the left picture, and merge this page, with the next page, where they're fucking to the porno.  I decided to just write another page, instead, and give this block a bit more content.  I didn't want to rush things.  It did, however, affect the story, slightly.  The mother gives the boy some wine, which comes and goes quick, and is only in there, because the picture demands it.
The narrative text here largely just advances the plot, and mostly goes along with the pictures.  There's a bit more of a focus on them following the movie, watching it together, and getting turned on by it, in a more abstract, sense.  I suggest a lot of things, but I don't really lay them out.  I make a bit of a reference to Romanian women being attractive, though. ;^)
The guide content is almost entirely sexual fantasy.  It goes through a couple of different sex acts that a mother and son, watching porn together, might attempt.  Largely, this is to pick up the slack from the narrative.  The last line, though, leads into the next page. 

The third page picture actually had a man and a woman on the (obviously not 80's tech) TV screen, originally.  The picture on the screen comes from pinknoise's Cattleya set.  I wish it had desaturated better, but hey, at least it's not a man.  I felt like this was a good enough picture, that I could get away with not having an 80's tech TV.  remember TechTV?  They were great, I mean, the screensavers, and extended play, wired for sex, anime unleashed, shit man, that was good TV
The narrative gives a bit more info about the movie that they're watching, and how they're using it in their lovemaking.  There is literally 0 actual sex narrative, here.  That all has to be in your head, dear reader.
The guide content is kind of throwaway, sexually, but it does give a bit of storyline content.  It's more of an outro for the block, overall.  Not much to say about it.

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So, I think next up was postpub blowjobs and penetration discussion, with Circe, then titjobs and facials, for Mommy Bubble 80's.  I'm pretty much on track with those, so I should get them out on time.

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Yes, we're finally doing another future plots thing.  I downloaded that one pixiv pull from 7chan, and I found a set there, that I just have to use.  Doujinaries has done it again, making a really, really, fun set, of 2 gyarus fucking 3 different shotas.  I'm thinking that it'll be a sort of "good boy recruitment" pamphlet, where these girls go around and find Mennonites in salt lake city, and bring them into the Temple.  Yes, Mennonites.
The story that I'm running with, right now, is that these gyarus are in salt lake city, which doesn't have an official Temple, but is pretty close to getting one.  They need more women on the rosters, though, and the first step to getting women, is getting boys.  The Mennonite population is essentially an oppressed minority in SLC, with the Mormons using CPS and State SSA to bust up their organizations, break up their families, and deny their women the all important, life sustaining force, that is SNAP, SSI, and TANF. 

Enter our Gyaru Lilian supersluts.  Their job is to go around recruiting all the good little Mennonite boys, and bringing them into the Temple, with the idea that they'll either turn their mothers, or be adopted by some Lilian, waiting in the wings.  I might just make a command decision that Mennonites are polygamist in my world, with a little handwave like, "they say they're not polygamist, but we say that we don't fuck little boys!"  This would essentially just be to have the plan involve the boys turning their entire "circle of mothers", away from the central patriarch, and towards Lilith.  I'll think about it.  The Mennonites really aren't polygamists, though.

Anyway, that's the story, and below, is the structure of the pamphlet, that I've worked out. 
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3 boys in total, none of them particularly dominant, but none of them particularly special, either.  This would work well for a "good boys" recruitment guide / nun recruitment pamphlet. 

Brown Haired boy (Train) -
2 buildup pics (sitting/standing[panties/flashing])
2 sex pics (mast/handjob)

Brown Haired boy (Home) -
5 sex pics (blow/foot/hand/cowgirl/missionary)

Dark Skinned boy (Beach) -
2-3 buildup pics (drinking/standing[flashing]/bending-over)
4 sex pics (handjob/motorboat-mast/doggy/cowgirl-cunnilingus)

Blue Haired boy (Home) -
2 buildup pics (sitting/standing[panties/flashing])
4 sex pics (handjob/blowjob/tablefuck/dualfuck)

Long haired gyaru wears pink nail polish, short haired gyaru wears blue nail polish.  Long hair seems like she might be a little bit more dominant, although they're both *really* dominant.  Short haired gyaru might be the more freaknasty of the two, going after asses a bit more, but she also might be more romantic. 
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The set that I'm using can be found here :

[DOUJIN3ARIES] JK Kurogyaru x Shota ~ Sakki Miteta yo ne?~
http://exhentai.org/g/816491/f33b8c2d33/ 

Funny thing, the entire "Oppressed Mennonites in Salt Lake City" thing came from the first boy, with the stupid hat.  I didn't want to make the story in Japan, so I decided that it was a religious hat.  That led to Mennonite.  But then, I was like, "why is the bus empty enough for them to get naked in?", which could only be, "nobody rides the bus, because they're all in cars, except the Mennonites, because they're oppressed", but that led to, "oppressed by who?", and of course, who would oppress the Mennonites, if not Mormons?  And then they're at a beach so it had to be Salt Lake City. 

It's amazing how these stories get written, huh?

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