Monday, August 24, 2015

Mommy Bubble 80's Weekend Positions Retrospective

Yay, I'm back!  I'm actually quite refreshed after taking the week (mostly) off.  I really do need to spend some time away from this project, every now and again.  Recharge my creative juices, and all that.  But now I'm back, and releasing again.  These pages were really, really, easy to do.  I'm not sure whether that's because I'm refreshed, or that they're just really straightforward, or whether I'm losing my touch, and writing total trash now.  We'll see, I guess.

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A word on how these are being implemented in the pamphlet, first.  I'm actually placing these right after the porno block, and splitting the nudism block up. 
The "ah sex" page will be going right before the porno block, while the "we're nudists now lol" page will be after the final Weekend Positions page.  You'll see what I mean this friday, when I release this week's omnibus. 
These pages are essentially Ellen talking about the weekend that she and her son spent, right after she popped his cherry.  So I guess they did it on friday night, and then spent the rest of the weekend naked and fucking. 

The first page picture was going to be of them in bed, but because they were both partially clothed, it didn't make a lot of sense.  I didn't want to waste characters explaining that they put on their bedclothes after waking up the next morning, so I just used a pic where they're both already naked.  I'll use the picture I was going to use (10 in the second MamaShoHen) later on, probably when I do the "we're sleeping together" block.
The narrative largely has 2 elements.  The first element moves the story forward, and establishes where they are in time (morning after watching the porno), while the second element actually describes the sex that they're having.  I like that I was able to work the mom's magazines and photobooks into the narrative, because I feel like it gives her some character.  She's been spending the last 10 or so years (almost) totally in chastity, so she'd need some form of release.  So of course, she has tons of Lilian porno laying around.  I'll just pretend that Greg is a good boy, and hasn't been rooting around in her drawers, and finding the porn.  The sex is what it is.  Pretty standard fare.
The guide content really shines on this page, I think.  There's a lot of story packed into only 7 or 800 characters.  I'm able to tell the Lilith origin story, tie it into the Lilians as a group, and add in a little bit of schismatic storyline, as well.  It's a good piece of content. 

The second page picture is, well, there's not much to say about it.  It's a woman and her son 69ing.  I figured it was one that I should use, since 69 isn't really something that I talk about too much.  The picture does its job.
The narrative content here was originally going to be first, as in, before the last picture, but with the talk of magazines and videos, I wanted it to be at least after they'd gotten back to the bedroom, to read the magazines, and watch some more videos.  The only thing that I can really say about the narrative, is that it gets a little freaknasty at the end.  The guide content does, as well.  Also, I focused a lot on the size difference making the 69 more difficult.  Maybe I focused on that too much.
The guide content here, again, focuses a lot on the size difference.  The mention of the actual ages, 4-6, was meant to kind of squick people out a little bit.  That may or may not work, and it may or may not be a good idea, but whatever.  The Lilians are pedos, let's not forget what that means.  One of the things that I've always found really interesting about this project, is the idea that the Lilians can consider having sex with a 7 or 8 year old to be okay, while having sex with a 4 or 5 year old is just too much.  I touched on this a little bit in Mommy Bubble 90's, but I kind of wish that I had a set that showed a boy growing from infant, to postpubescent, to show what the "ideal" Lilian upbringing would be.  Of course, something like that would get really squicky, really fast.

Coming all over their face!

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Next up is the intro/outro for Mennonite Molestation Madness.  I'm going to just go ahead and do them both together, so that I can have a more solid framework for when I'm doing the actual sex content.  Doing it this way also gives me another week to agonize over how the fuck I'm supposed to write realistic girltalk.  On Friday, I'll be releasing the other half of the Weekend Positions block.  Remember when I did 4 pages a day, and not 4 pages a week?  Yeah, that might be coming back, and it might not.  We'll see.  

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