Tuesday, July 26, 2016

Walk-In Welcome 2 Retrospective

This felt a bit more difficult than these usually do, but it's probably just me being a little out of practice. 

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These were really, really straightforward.  It's pretty much just wall to wall sex here, to the point where I kind of felt like I needed another page, just to close things out properly.  I do feel like the story progressed well enough, though.  There's a relatively clearly defined beginning, middle, and end.  The characters are explained reasonably well, and while there isn't much in the way of storyline, what is there is decent enough. 

Still think another page would have been good, though. 

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Next up is probably more Crone Zone, and then the last bits of Gonzo Guide.  

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